Thursday, November 19, 2015

Main Points of My Argument Essay


Thesis: Cigarettes are all bad for ones overall well being.

Main Points:
  1. Bad for Mental Health
- "A recent study has shown that there could be a causal link between smoking and schizophrenia." (mentalhealth.org)
- "Research into smoking and stress has shown that instead of helping people to relax, smoking actually increases anxiety and tension" (mentalhealth.org)
-In a book written by the surgeon general he indicates that cigarettes are mentally "addicting." (6)
  1. Bad for Physical Health 
- "Tobacco narrows blood vessels and puts a strain on the heart" (tobaccofreemaine.com).
- "It also leads to lack of oxygen and shortness of breath" (tobaccofreemaine.com).
-  In a Time Magazine article with a researcher into E-cigs it has been found that E-cigs are bad for your health because they do not cause you to cough which can " keep you from choking and removes agents that may cause infection."   
  1. Bad for Emotional Health
- In a website article on livestrong.com smoking cigarettes removes the feeling of Euphoria which is "the result is a biochemical and emotional dependence on the drug, according to a 2012 report by the National Institute on Drug Abuse."
- "As euphoric as your emotions were when you took a puff, your emotions swing the other way when the drug is removed." (livestrong.com)
Work Cited:
1. "Smoking and Mental Health." Smoking and Mental Health. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://www.mentalhealth.org.uk/help-information/mental-health-a-z/s/smoking/>.
2. "Emotional Effects of Smoking." LIVESTRONG.COM. LIVESTRONG.COM, 24 Apr. 2015. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://www.livestrong.com/article/89262-emotional-effects-smoking/>.
3. "Health Effects of Tobacco." - Facts About Youth Smoking, Nicotine Addiction & Secondhand Smoke. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://www.tobaccofreemaine.org/channels/parents/learn_more_about_health_effects.php>.
4. How Tobacco Smoke Causes Disease: The Biology and Behavioral Basis for Smoking-attributable Disease: A Report of the Surgeon General. Rockville, MD: U.S. Dept. of Health and Human Services, Public Health Service, Office of the Surgeon General, 2010. Print.
5. "4 Weird Health Effects of E-Cigarettes." Time. Time, n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://time.com/3860166/ecigs-research/>.

Similarities and Differences in Spriggs Essay

Similarities
·         All three articles state positions clearly
·         All articles similar to Spriggs’ essay include appropriate background information
·         All articles have authoritative tones which is similar to Spriggs.
·         All articles appeal to the readers values (pathos).
Similarities/Differences
·         Half of the group articles include responses to what others have said or done
·         A third of the group articles include clear indications of why the topic matters as does Spriggs.
·         A third of the group articles include evidence to their arguments which is similar to Spriggs’ essay.
·         A third of the group articles include more than one point of view which is similar to Spriggs’ essay.

·         Two thirds of the group articles address global issues which is similar to what Spriggs addresses. 

Tuesday, November 10, 2015

Ad paper reflection page

Thesis: Through the usage of symbolism advertisements from cigarette companies deceitfully alter one's subconscious to persuade the audience member to buy the product.
Audience: My audience were those who find themselves attracted to cigarettes due to subliminal influences from advertisers.
Feedback: During my time writing this paper I got feedback from a program on the internet and also classmates who gave helpful tips in how to formulate some of my ideas.
Interests: This paper was interesting to me due to its unique nature.  I find myself constantly observing all of the persuasive techniques used in advertisements on a day-to-day basis.  I recently learned about Neurological Linguistic Programming from a youtube video, and it led me to focus my paper
Comments: I thought this was a fun writing assignment simply due to the in-depth analysis of a persuasive technique.
Intro:Album covers are ways in which artists prequel there pieces of music.
BP1: Symbolism in Jay Z/Eminem album cover
-Colors
-Eye position
BP2: Symbolism in Pixie Lott album cover
-Eye position
-Hand position
BP3: Contrast between the depictions from the symbolism in the album cover
-The contrasting eye positions and picture qualities imply that the Pixie Lott album is more seductive and flirtatious due to its smooth edges while the Eminem/jay z album is more pixilated and rough which implies a blunt and direct form of music.
Conclusion paragraph

  • Album Covers: The Eminem/Jay Z, Jay Z is looking straight at the audience while eminem is looking above the camera, possibly pointing to different personalities. Contrasting colors between the two artists possibly conveying a “conflict” in the audience. Also possibly showing the color of the two artists. Pixie Lott, the album cover shows her(Pixie Lott) seductively looking at the audience, possibly presenting that the album is going to be suggestive. Appealing towards both female and male audiences because of the “seductive” look and the albums look mirroring that of a makeup magazine cover.
  • Rolex & Hello Kitty watches: Wealthy/mature vr Poor/childish. The Rolex is the picture of wealth, it’s got diamonds, fancy watchwork, it’s an elegant design. Compared to the hello kitty watch which lacks detail and finesse, it’s lacking the design and materials of the Rolex showing that it was thrown together with less care. It’s suggested through general design and color choice, the color of the Rolex ranges from white to gray at most while the hello kitty watch is mostly pink. This divergence in color choices shows a difference in maturity between the audience of the two watches.

Tim Wise



  • The speaker, presents the positions of saying the “N-word” from the perspective of a white man and a black man, he also brings up the perspective of saying redneck jokes while being a redneck and while not being one, he then mentions jewish jokes from a non-jewish perspective and a jewish perspective. The speaker only really argues from the position of a white man and he’s arguing expecting a white audience.
  • Our group found it pretty persuasive, he represented both sides fairly well, he refuted the other side. You can jokingly call someone a redneck without them getting angry, then said that he’d get in a fight if someone outside of south Texas said redneck. He mentioned his past and his book, that’s it. Our group felt like it was pretty thorough, he considered the opposing side, thus improving his arguments.
  • No, he does not he states from the beginning that saying the “N-word” is wrong for a white man, his language reinforces that. Special interest might be to get his book to sell. He does consider opposing views, he uses the views of someone born outside south texas, and as non-jewish. He is his own source thus it reflects his own viewpoint.
  • Our group interpreted the publisher as the Boston College that the speaker was lecturing at. We determined that this could’ve influenced his speech, thus influencing him to use words and statements more tuned to a younger yet educated audience. He was acting liberal.
  • No, our group did not have any outstanding sources other than our own personal opinions on the subject.
  • Our group believed that it did both, most of us believed that in the right context it could be seen as a friendly joke, and we all agreed that you wouldn’t say it to someone you had just met. We believe that it mostly supported our thesis. It represents a point to mainly acknowledge.
  • The speech seemed to be focused on a mainly white audience, stating “Let the blacks figure it out on their own…”. Our group was definitely a part of that audience. The main point was to argue should white people say the “N-word”
  • Cigarettes and Neurological Linguistic Programming

         Advertisements in this day and age are neglected and thought of as unsuccessful in drawing in a potential buyer.  Their blunt way of advertising their product allows the viewer to see easily past the persuasive attempts made to entice the consumer.  An advertisement is a thing that either attracts or repels one from buying a product, and the latter statements are what allow for subliminal advertising to work.  The persuasive techniques used in modern times have changed to persuading one's subconscious to entice buyers.  To uncover and expose subliminal advertising, one must only observe and understand that the obvious symbolism in advertisements is meant to entice one to buy the advertisers product rather than the same product from a different producer.  The nature of the advertisements being distinct allows for the subconscious to recognize quickly and comprehend their persuasive intents.  By recognizing and understanding their persuasive intentions, the subconscious then feels comfortable with the product that then makes the consumer more likely to buy their product over competitors.   This form of persuasion is Neurological Linguistic Programming.  Through the usage of symbolism advertisements from cigarette companies deceitfully alter one's subconscious to persuade the audience member to buy the product.

         The Camel Crush advertisement's symbolism is used to persuade the viewer to relate the feeling of peace, serenity, and life to their product.  Its background is a form of symbolism by depicting a soothing blue color to give the audience member the feeling of serenity and peace.  The latter also serves as a way to illustrate to the viewer a cause and effect.  The advertisement depicts that if the viewer buys their product the cigarette will consequentially give them a feeling of serenity and peace.  The water also serves as a form of symbolism. The water represents life and therefore, contrasts the commonly known correlation of cigarettes and death.  Many anti-cigarette advertisements attempt to paint a picture depicting the effects of cigarettes and how they will consequentially reduce your lifetime significantly.  By refuting the commonly known anti-cigarette advertisements images of death using this type of symbolism, the advertiser persuades the audience into viewing their product as a healthier alternative to their addiction.  The latter also could serve as a way to entice those who have yet to begin smoking cigarettes by being depicted as previously mentioned, a healthier alternative.  The symbolism involved in this advertisement is quickly noticed by viewers due to its simplicity and intended emphasis and therefore, allows one's subconscious to recognize and familiarize itself with the product.  By persuading the viewers subconscious to familiarize itself with the product the audience is, therefore, more likely to choose the cigarette advertised rather than a cigarette pack from a different company.

         The Blu Cigarette advertisement uses symbolism in order to persuade subliminally one's subconscious to relate their cigarette to a feeling of elegance and prestige.  Interestingly enough the typical anti-cigarette advertisement in modern times consists of belittling smoking and presenting a picture opposite to that of elegance and prestige.  The symbols in this advertisement include the interior of a private jet in the background, a beautiful woman in a fur coat, and diction implying prestige.  The setting being the interior of a private jet affects one by enticing the viewer to correlate the product to a feeling of wealth and superiority.  The beautiful woman acts as a technique of the advertiser in catching the viewer's attention.  She carries herself as a wealthy person and happens to be wearing a fur coat.  The fur coat then acts similar to the private jet by symbolizing wealth and prestige.  By making the connection of wealth and prestige with the advertisers product, the audience familiarizes the imagery in the advertisement and therefore, will feel more elegant when purchasing and smoking the product.  Lastly, the advertiser uses words such as "premier" and "redefined" to subliminally imply that by buying and smoking their product you will be a redefined and superior person in comparison to someone who does not own and smoke Blu cigarettes.   The aforementioned diction in the advertisement appeals to the viewers craving to conform with societies constant pressure to be "cool" or be better than others.  Overall these symbols serve as a means to not only familiarize the viewers subconscious to the product but also to connect the two visualizations of wealth and prestige.  In doing so, the audience is more inclined to purchase the advertiser's product over competitors in which they have not familiarized themselves with yet.

         The American Spirit advertisement uses symbolism to persuade subliminally one's subconscious to relate their product to the feeling of being in touch with nature.  The reason the advertiser chose nature as an idea to compare their product to is that nature fits in perfect harmony with life.  In our modern times, we relate nature automatically to life and energy simply due to its definition.  Symbols such as a Native American smoking a peace pipe and soil at the base of the cigarette packs act similarly in deceiving the viewers subconscious.  The Native American serves not only as a metaphor for nature but also as a means to depict the history involved in tobacco.  The history of tobacco and cigarettes are connected deeply to the socioeconomic history of basically every continent on this planet.  Consequentially, the viewer's subconscious quickly connects the product to history.  By connecting the ideas of nature and history with the Native American, the advertiser successfully attaches the intended image in the viewers subconscious.  Lastly, the soil serves as another way of symbolically referencing nature.  The soil that the advertisement references is a reference to nature due to the fact that it takes up a considerable amount of space on the Earth's crust.  Due to the latter, the viewer is subliminally persuaded to correlate nature to their product and consequentially recognizes their product as a natural thing to purchase and smoke.  Even though labels on the package claim that the product is still as harmful as any other cigarette the symbols that are intended to grab the viewers attention are successful in doing so and, therefore, render the fine print irrelevant in the viewers subconscious.  The symbolism involved with the persuasive advertisement of American Spirit, therefore, successfully familiarizes the audience member with the product and increases the chance that their product will get chosen over a competitors product.  

         Neurological Linguistic Programming is a very popular form of persuasion in advertising.  Through its use of symbolism even the most observant audience member can be persuaded.  The symbolism and the simplicity of it allow the advertiser a means to familiarize the audience with the product rather than force the viewer to leave the house and purchase the product immediately.  It is a slow process but quite effective due to the way in which we process information.  The common ideas that were depicted by the cigarette advertisements were serenity, elegance, and nature.  Each of the latter ideas results in one commonality;  they all are well sought after.  By depicting ideas that many viewers seek in a product they appeal to the audience and their needs and therefore, successfully plant an image of their product in the minds of the audience.  

    Sunday, November 8, 2015

    Ad Draft Paper

    Advertisements in this day and age are neglected and thought of as unsuccessful in drawing in a potential buyer.  Their blunt way of advertising their product allows for the viewer to easily see past the persuasive attempts made in order to entice the consumer.    An advertisement is a thing that either draws or repels one from buying a product and the latter statements are what allow for subliminal advertising to work.  The persuasive techniques used in modern times have changed  to persuading one's subconscious in order to entice buyers.  In order to uncover and expose subliminal advertising, one must simply observe and understand that the obvious symbolism in advertisements is meant to entice one to buy the advertisers product rather than the same product from a different producer.  The nature of the advertisements being obvious allows for the subconscious to quickly recognize and comprehend their persuasive intents.  By comprehending and recognizing their persuasive intents, the subconscious then feels comfortable with the product which then makes the consumer more likely to buy their product over competitors.   This form of persuasion is known as Neurological Linguistic Programming.  Through the usage of symbolism advertisements from cigarette companies deceitfully alter one's subconscious in order to persuade the audience member to buy the product. 



    The Camel Crush advertisement's symbolism is used in order to persuade the viewer to relate the feeling of peace, serenity, and life to their product.  Its background is a form of symbolism by depicting a soothing blue color in order to give the viewer the feeling of serenity and peace.  The latter also serves as a way to depict to the viewer a cause and effect.  The advertisement depicts that if the viewer buys their product the cigarette will consequentially give them a feeling of serenity and peace.  The water also serves as a form of symbolism. The water represents life and therefore, contrasts the commonly known correlation of cigarettes and death.  By contrasting the commonly known image of death, the advertiser persuades the audience into viewing their product as a healthier alternative to their addiction.  The latter also could serve as a way to entice those who are not yet hooked on smoking cigarettes by being depicted as previously mentioned, a healthier alternative.  The symbolism involved in this advertisement is easily noticed and therefore, allows one's subconscious to recognize and familiarize itself with the product.  By persuading the viewers subconscious to familiarize itself with the product the viewer is, therefore, more likely to choose the cigarette being advertised rather than a cigarette pack from a different company.

        The Blu Cigarette advertisement uses symbolism in order to subliminally persuade one's subconscious to relate their cigarette to a feeling of elegance and prestige.  The commonalities in this advertisement include a private jet in the background, a beautiful woman, and diction implying prestige.  The setting being the interior of a private jet affects one by enticing the viewer to correlate the product to a feeling of wealth and superiority.  The beautiful woman acts as a technique of the advertiser in catching the viewer's attention.  She carries herself as a wealthy person and happens to be wearing a fur coat.  The fur coat then acts similar to the private jet by symbolizing wealth and prestige.  Lastly, the advertiser uses words such as "premier" and "redefined" to subliminally imply that by buying and smoking their product you will be redefined as a superior person in comparison to someone who does not own and smoke Blu cigarettes.   Overall these symbols serve as a means to not only familiarize the viewers subconscious to the product but also to connect the two visualizations of wealth and prestige.  In doing so the viewer is more inclined to purchase the advertiser's product over a competitors in which they have not been familiarized.  

    The American Spirit advertisement uses symbolism in order to subliminally persuade one's subconscious to relate their product to the feeling of being in touch with nature.  The reason the advertiser chose nature as an idea to relate their product to is that nature fits in perfect harmony with life.  In our modern times, we relate nature automatically to life and energy simply due to its definition.  Symbols such as a Native American smoking a peace pipe and soil at the base of the cigarette packs act similarly in deceiving the viewers subconscious.  The Native American serves not only as a metaphor for nature but also as a means to depict that history involved in tobacco.  By connecting the idea of nature and history with the Native American the advertiser successfully attaches the intended image in the viewers subconscious.  Lastly, the soil serves as another way of symbolically referencing nature. Due to the latter, the viewer is subliminally persuaded to correlate nature to their product and consequentially recognizes their product as a natural thing to purchase and smoke.  Even though labels on the package claim that the product is still as harmful as any other cigarette the symbols that are intended to grab the viewers attention are successful in doing so and, therefore, render the fine print irrelevant in the viewers subconscious. 

    Neurological Linguistic Programming is a very popular form of persuasion in advertising.  Through its use of symbolism even the most observant audience member can be persuaded.  The symbolisms simplicity allows the advertiser a means to familiarize the viewer with the product rather than force the viewer to leave the house and purchase the product immediately.  It is a slow process but quite effective due to the way in which we process information.  The common ideas that were depicted by the cigarette advertisements were serenity, elegance, and nature.  Each of the latter ideas all have one commonality;  they all well sought after.  By depicting ideas that many viewers seek in a product they appeal to the audience and their needs and therefore, successfully plant an image of their product in the minds of the audience.     

    Thursday, November 5, 2015

    Environmental Effects of Global Warming

    "How green is a Tesla, really?" slate. n.d Web. 9 May. 2015.

    "How 'Green' is Lithium" kitco. n.d. Web. 16 Dec. 2014.

    "Tesla Motor's Dirty Little Secret Is a Major Problem" fool. n.d. Web

    The aforementioned articles regarding Lithium mines and their impact on the environment create an interesting discussion regarding our efforts to create a "greener" environment that we live in today.  The articles stress the impact that Lithium Ion Batteries have on the the planet and how much CO2 they truly emit.
    VERA. Addicting info, 7 Of The Dumbest Things Trump Has Ever Said To Disprove Global Warming. June 18, 1015. Nov 5, 2015.

    "The Concept of global warming" Trump directly states here that he disbelieves in global warming, a global phenom that is warming up the planet due to the increase of greenhouse gases because of the increase of CO2 in the atmosphere. Scientists around the world all agree that this is happening and we need to find a way to stop it.
    "Glaciers are melting, sea levels are rising, cloud forests are drying, and wildlife is scrambling to keep pace. It's becoming clear that humans have caused most of the past century's warming by releasing heat-trapping gases as we power our modern lives. Called greenhouse gases, their levels are higher now than in the last 650,000 years."
    This quote from National Geographic's "What is Global Warming" article is talking about what global warming is, Trump believe this isn't happening and he apparently blames the Chinese for the "concept". But it is happening, the reason I chose this tweet is because there is a plethora of sources from scientists around the world talking about this subject. This research paper talks about global warming and the sources that go into the study of it. It is my belief that global warming is real, and I've come to this conclusion from the sources I've read/heard and from the changes I see around me, now it's just up to others to do the same.

    "What is Global Warming."National Geographic. N.p., n.d. Web. 05 Nov. 2015
    A. V. Karnaukhov "Role of the Biosphere in the formation of the Earth's Climate: The Greenhouse Catastrophe" Institute of Cell Physics. Russian Academy of Sciences, Pushino, Moscow Region.

    This position does not appeal to me and I find it irritating because Trump does not support his claim with any facts, stats, or reasoning in his opinion. It is a non-supported claim which I find irritating.


    "Earth science communication team at NASA's Jet Propulsion Labratory". Climate Change: Vital Signs of the Planet. California Institute of Technology. Nov 4, 2015.
    Excercise on pp 62:
    1. My paper on advertisements
    2. Whether or not to study for an exam
    3. Whether or not to study for a quiz
    4. Workout to stay healthy
    5. Go to school to learn
    6. Learn to be successful
    7. Be successful to be happy
    8. Be happy to learn
    9. Took a position on whether I thought a specific tv show was "good"
    10. Took a position on whether I thought a specific video game was "good"