Saturday, December 5, 2015

Work Cited For Final Paper

(World Vision) "What You Need to Know: Crisis in Syria, Refugees, and the Impact on Children." World Vision. World Vision, n.d. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

(Schwartz) Schwartz, Felicia. "U.S. to Boost Contribution for Humanitarian Aid to Syrian War Refugees." WSJ. Wall Street Journal, 21 Sept. 2015. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

(Ross) Ross, Chuck. "FBI Director Admits US Can’t Vet All Syrian Refugees For Terror Ties [VIDEO]." The Daily Caller. The Daily Caller, 21 Oct. 2015. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

(Przybyla) Przybyla, Heidi. "Carson Says Syrian Refugees Don't Want to Come to U.S." OnPolitics. USA Today, 29 Nov. 2015. Web. 05 Dec. 2015.

Final Paper

     Mother nature has in all of history been known to affect many lives with ease.  In competition, however, war and violence amongst mankind have towered above mother nature in the numbers in which it has taken or uprooted.  In the last decade, natural disasters such as Hurricane Katrina, the Indian Ocean Tsunami, and the earthquake in Haiti have affected a total of approximately ten million two hundred thousand lives.  The Syrian Civil War, on the other hand, has been responsible for uprooting approximately twelve million lives in a span of almost five years (World Vision).  This Civil War has broken up families, and many refugees are now starving and homeless.  The crisis the world now faces is how to aid these people in their time of need to lessen and prevent any further hardships for those affected.  Some suggest that the United States allow refugees into our country, and some argue that the latter would be unsafe.  Those that believe the United States should offer refugees passageway into America disregard the obvious threat that these potential migrants possess.  However, rather than shut out these people in need completely, the United States should continue their efforts in keeping Syrian refugees out of danger.

     The Syrian refugees come from mixed backgrounds and are very difficult to vet.  The Biographic checks used by the state department to many seems like a solution to the previously mentioned statement.  However, according to the Director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation, James Comey the United States "can only query against that which we have collected" (Ross).  Director Comey brings up an excellent and quite an obvious point.  Some argue that the United States did the same in Iraq and brought many migrants and immigrants over to the homeland after and during the conflicts.  However, in Iraq, the Intel on many of the people living in there was much better than in Syria and consequentially allowed for Iraqi's to be vetted quicker and brought into the country.  Due to the lack of influence the United States has in Syria it makes the two countries very different and thus renders the previously stated argument as irrelevant.  So, in other words, Director Comey's statement is quite true, "we can query our database until the cows come home, but nothing will show up because we have no record of them" (Ross).  By not having good intel on those entering America's borders it is difficult to know for a fact that these people are not entering to harm those within the United States.

     Many touch bases on the aspect of the Syrian Refugees entering the United States as being primarily combat aged men.  Firstly, the previously stated fallacy has been corrected by the State Department by giving the true statistic as being "two percent are single men of combat age" (Przybyla).  Furthermore, even if the argument were true, it proves very little regarding the threat that those combat aged men pose on America because it is acting on a stereotypical assumption that men pose a greater threat than women or children.  Terrorism is primarily psychological and can be, therefore, accomplished by man, woman, and child.  However, the issue that the world is now facing is the approximate two to three million Syrian children not attending school according to World Vision International due to the Syrian Civil War.  Those children,  due to the craving children have for learning, will be educated possibly by those already radicalized enough to spread terrorism to other parts of the world.  The issue that America faces due to the latter is not only problematic to the current generations of Americans but future as well.  So, even without looking at the moral obligation that the Syrian Refugee crisis poses one can see that it is an apparent risk to America's National Security not to help these Syrian refugees by giving them humanitarian aid and the education necessary to ensure not only America's safety but the Syrian's as well.  

     The United States is already well invested in sustaining the region and bringing the fighting to an end.  Due to the four and a half billion dollars America has poured into Syrian relief efforts America is already well invested in doing the latter according to an article from the Wall Street Journal, written by Felicia Schwartz.  If America were to halt all relief efforts today, the four and a half billion dollars would simply go to waste and consequentially lead to an uproar amongst tax payers.  By continuing to fund and aid Syrian refugees, America would not only appease their citizens moral obligations but it would also render the already great deal of money invested worth the investment.

     There are many sides to Syrian refugee crisis.  There are some that believe that America is morally obligated to allow migrants into the borders, and there are some that think America should have absolutely no part in this Middle Eastern conflict.  However, as stated in a previous paragraph, both would present America with an unnecessary National Security risk.  If America were to allow these Syrian refugees into the borders, the government would have to rely on intel in Syria that the Director of the FBI has already deemed as having "gaps" (Ross).  To do so would not only be unwise in regards to America's security but it would also destroy America's worldwide image as a nation willing to lend a helping hand.  Furthermore, the cultural shock that Syrians would witness when entering America would be great.  It would be similar to Americans being relocated to Africa.  The culture is simply not the same and therefore, makes those relocated culturally isolated.  According to Presidential Candidate Ben Carson, who recently visited Syria, the majority of the Syrian people do not want to leave their homes (Przybyla).  The latter serves once again as a reason the United States should aid the Syrian refugees with camps that could serve as a long-term solution for the millions of refugees.  Camps in Jordan, Za'atari, Lebanon, and Azraq have all taken in tens of thousands of refugees already (World Vision).  During Ben Carson's visit to Syria he said he visited some camps in and around the area and was quoted saying that "the camps would need about three billion more dollars" (Przybyla) annually to remain effective in acting as a long-term solution to an exponentially growing problem.  By giving the refugees physical aid, shelter, water, and clothes in said camps America could ensure a more stable environment in which the refugees are truly thankful for America's aid in their time of need.  

     The Syrian refugee crisis is one that must be discussed and debated due to its relevance in today's quite unstable state.  Between the possible security risk that the youth could pose towards future generations as well as the moral obligation that American's and many other people face, it is necessary for American's to set the pace in lending a helping hand to those in need.  By doing so, America will not only be its best interest in regards to safety but it will also represent itself as the a beacon of hope in a world in disarray, and violence.

Draft Paper #3 + Work Cited

     Mother nature has in all of history been known to affect many lives with ease.  In competition, however, war and violence amongst mankind have towered above mother nature in the numbers in which it has taken or uprooted.  In the last decade, natural disasters such as Hurricane Katrina, the Indian Ocean Tsunami, and the earthquake in Haiti have affected a total of approximately ten million two hundred thousand lives.  The Syrian Civil War, on the other hand, has been responsible for uprooting approximately twelve million lives in a span of almost five years (World Vision).  This Civil War has broken up families, and many refugees are now starving and homeless.  The crisis the world now faces is how to aid these people in their time of need to lessen and prevent any further hardships for those affected.  Some suggest that the United States allow refugees into our country, and some argue that the latter would be unsafe.  Those that believe the United States should offer refugees passageway into America disregard the obvious threat that these potential migrants possess.  However, rather than shut out these people in need completely, the United States should continue their efforts in keeping Syrian refugees out of danger.

     The Syrian refugees come from mixed backgrounds and are very difficult to vet.  The Biographic checks used by the state department to many seems like a solution to the aforementioned statement.  However, according to the Director of the Federal Bureau of Investigation, James Comey the United States "can only query against that which we have collected" (The Daily Caller).  Director Comey brings up an excellent and quite an obvious point.  In Iraq, the United States brought many immigrants into the country during and after the conflicts in the region.  However, Iraq and Syria are quite different regarding the Intel the United States has on those living in both regions.  So, in other words, Director Comey's statement is quite true, "we can query our database until the cows come home, but nothing will show up because we have no record of them" (The Daily Caller).  By not having good intel on those entering America's borders it is difficult to know for a fact that these people are not entering to harm those within the United States.

     Many touch bases on the aspect of the Syrian Refugees primarily being combat aged men.  That argument, however, proves very little regarding the threat refugees pose on America because it is acting on a stereotypical assumption that men pose a greater threat than women or children.  Terrorism is primarily psychological and can be, therefore, accomplished by man, woman, and child.  However, the issue that the world is now facing is the approximate two to three million Syrian children not attending school according to World Vision International due to the Syrian Civil War.  Those children,  due to the craving children have for learning, will be educated possibly by those already radicalized enough to spread terrorism to other parts of the world.  The issue that America faces due to the latter is not only problematic to the current generations of Americans but future as well.  So, even without looking at the moral obligation that the Syrian Refugee crisis poses one can see that it is an apparent risk to America's National Security not to help these Syrian refugees by giving them humanitarian aid and the education necessary to ensure not only America's safety but the Syrian's as well.

     The United States is already well invested in sustaining the region and bringing the fighting to an end.  Due to the four and a half billion dollars America has poured into Syrian relief efforts America is already well invested in doing the latter.  If America were to halt all relief efforts today, the four and a half billion dollars would simply go to waste and consequentially lead to an uproar amongst tax payers.  By continuing to fund and aid Syrian refugees, America would not only appease their citizens moral obligations but it would also render the already great deal of money invested worth the investment.

     There are many sides to Syrian refugee crisis.  There are some believe that America is morally obligated to allow migrants into the borders, and there are some that think America should have absolutely no part in this Middle Eastern war.  However, as stated in a previous paragraph, both would present America with an unnecessary National Security risk.  If America were to allow these Syrian refugees into the borders, the government would have to rely on intel in Syria that the Director of the FBI has already deemed as having "gaps" (Daily Caller).  To do so would not only be unwise in regards to America's security but it would also destroy America's worldwide image as a nation willing to lend a helping hand.  Furthermore, the cultural shock that Syrians would witness when entering America would be great.  It would be similar to Americans being relocated to Africa.  The culture is simply not the same and therefore, makes those relocated culturally isolated.  According to Presidential Candidate Ben Carson, who recently visited Syria, the majority of the Syrian people do not want to leave their homes (USA Today).  The latter serves once again as a reason the United States should aid the Syrian refugees with camps that could serve as a long-term for the millions of refugees.  Camps in Jordan, Za'atari, Lebanon, and Azraq have all taken in tens of thousands of refugees already (World Vision).  During Ben Carson's visit to Syria he said he visited some camps in and around the area and was quoted saying that "the camps would need about three billion more dollars" (USA Today) annually in order to remain effective in acting as a long-term solution to an exponentially growing problem.  By giving the refugees physical aid, shelter, water, and clothes in said camps America could ensure a more stable environment in which the refugees are truly thankful for America's aid in their time of need.

     The Syrian refugee crisis is one that must be discussed and debated due to its relevance in today's quite unstable state.  Between the possible security risk that the youth could pose towards future generations as well as the moral obligation that American's and many other people face, it is necessary for American's to set the pace in lending a helping hand to those in need.  By doing so, America will not only be its best interest but it will also represent itself as a beacon of hope in the world in disarray, and violence.

Work Cited:
"Amnesty International." 8 Ways to Solve the World Refugee Crisis. Amnesty, n.d. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

"What You Need to Know: Crisis in Syria, Refugees, and the Impact on Children." World Vision. World Vision, n.d. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

Condon, Stephanie. "What Is the Syrian Refugee Vetting Process?" CBSNews. CBS Interactive, 17 Nov. 2015. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

Schwartz, Felicia. "U.S. to Boost Contribution for Humanitarian Aid to Syrian War Refugees." WSJ. Wall Street Journal, 21 Sept. 2015. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

Ross, Chuck. "FBI Director Admits US Can’t Vet All Syrian Refugees For Terror Ties [VIDEO]." The Daily Caller. The Daily Caller, 21 Oct. 2015. Web. 04 Dec. 2015.

Writers Blog Post: Q's 1-5 Pg 181

1. The insight that Melissa Rubin gives about the Coca-Cola advertisement is that it is appealing to the male serviceman demographic of Americans during a wartime environment.
2. She depicts the history by referring to the current world war that America was taking part in and she also depicts the more male dominant world that America was living in during said time period.
3. A question I like to ask myself when analyzing an advertisement is, "what can I learn from myself." By doing so, it allows me to get a more in-depth analysis of the rhetoric used.
4. Apple product advertisement reflects a very modern and sleek culture that craves technological improvements on a rapid timeline.
5. The Ipad pro advertisement targets a younger generation that is striving to better society through design and innovation. By using space as their tool, they depict a very futuristic and exploratory environment that fits perfectly into rhetorically persuading the younger generations.

Writers Blog Post: Q's 1-4 pg. 175

1. Heather Havrilesky's main insight about Mad Men is isolation.  She sees these characters as struggling to find themselves as depicted in the fifth paragraph.
2. Heather Havrilesky establishes her  authority to write about this show by quoting specific scenes as well as in the seventh paragraph depicting a character development throughout season one to season four.  By doing so, it tells the reader that the author is well versed in her topic of choice.
3. She appeals to readers' emotions in the very beginning of the paper by referring to the isolation that so many face, as depicted in her claim of people seeking an unattainable American dream.
4. Yes, she peeked my interest about the show due to the in-depth nature of the human psyche that it could possibly present.

Thursday, November 19, 2015

Main Points of My Argument Essay


Thesis: Cigarettes are all bad for ones overall well being.

Main Points:
  1. Bad for Mental Health
- "A recent study has shown that there could be a causal link between smoking and schizophrenia." (mentalhealth.org)
- "Research into smoking and stress has shown that instead of helping people to relax, smoking actually increases anxiety and tension" (mentalhealth.org)
-In a book written by the surgeon general he indicates that cigarettes are mentally "addicting." (6)
  1. Bad for Physical Health 
- "Tobacco narrows blood vessels and puts a strain on the heart" (tobaccofreemaine.com).
- "It also leads to lack of oxygen and shortness of breath" (tobaccofreemaine.com).
-  In a Time Magazine article with a researcher into E-cigs it has been found that E-cigs are bad for your health because they do not cause you to cough which can " keep you from choking and removes agents that may cause infection."   
  1. Bad for Emotional Health
- In a website article on livestrong.com smoking cigarettes removes the feeling of Euphoria which is "the result is a biochemical and emotional dependence on the drug, according to a 2012 report by the National Institute on Drug Abuse."
- "As euphoric as your emotions were when you took a puff, your emotions swing the other way when the drug is removed." (livestrong.com)
Work Cited:
1. "Smoking and Mental Health." Smoking and Mental Health. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://www.mentalhealth.org.uk/help-information/mental-health-a-z/s/smoking/>.
2. "Emotional Effects of Smoking." LIVESTRONG.COM. LIVESTRONG.COM, 24 Apr. 2015. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://www.livestrong.com/article/89262-emotional-effects-smoking/>.
3. "Health Effects of Tobacco." - Facts About Youth Smoking, Nicotine Addiction & Secondhand Smoke. N.p., n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://www.tobaccofreemaine.org/channels/parents/learn_more_about_health_effects.php>.
4. How Tobacco Smoke Causes Disease: The Biology and Behavioral Basis for Smoking-attributable Disease: A Report of the Surgeon General. Rockville, MD: U.S. Dept. of Health and Human Services, Public Health Service, Office of the Surgeon General, 2010. Print.
5. "4 Weird Health Effects of E-Cigarettes." Time. Time, n.d. Web. 19 Nov. 2015. <http://time.com/3860166/ecigs-research/>.

Similarities and Differences in Spriggs Essay

Similarities
·         All three articles state positions clearly
·         All articles similar to Spriggs’ essay include appropriate background information
·         All articles have authoritative tones which is similar to Spriggs.
·         All articles appeal to the readers values (pathos).
Similarities/Differences
·         Half of the group articles include responses to what others have said or done
·         A third of the group articles include clear indications of why the topic matters as does Spriggs.
·         A third of the group articles include evidence to their arguments which is similar to Spriggs’ essay.
·         A third of the group articles include more than one point of view which is similar to Spriggs’ essay.

·         Two thirds of the group articles address global issues which is similar to what Spriggs addresses.